Sunday, September 20, 2009

a story without a name...yet

i am writing this book and well since i haven't wrote anything on the mighty writers only read things i thought i probably should write something even though its not cute or funny like mikaylas story but all story's have to be different so here it is.
Oh and p.s. if any of you think of a name for this story i would be really happy to get ideas thanks!

PROLOGUE
Milly had lived up in the mountains her whole 14 year old life. she lived with her father, mother, and her older brother Landon who was almost 18 years old.

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Milly woke up to hands pounding on a hard door it was still dark outside. she got out of her warm bed and put her feet on the cold wooden floor.when she got to the door she peeked through the curtains even though she knew it was rude to spy on people but she couldn't resist. when she finally opened the door there were 2 men three times as big as her. when she looked at them the one on the right said in a deep voice that was almost a whisper and said "is your father and brother here?" "o well no, i mean yes but they're asleep you see you are here quite Early it is still very dark outside a little before 5:00 and my father even though he is a farmer he doesnt usaly get up this eairly, so it would be best if you came just a little later in the day sir" "well we don't have that type of time little girl go wake him up and tell him he has three seconds to get down her we don't have time for anything right now get you brother too!" he said sternly Milly didn't think he was a very happy man because for the last five minutes he had been there he hadn't got even had on half a smile on his face. He was not exactly frowning but his face some how showed his whole life and Milly new it was no a happy one. so she decided not to make the man mad and just simply follow orders.

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When her father and Landon were down stairs and dressed, father didn't look surprised to see them, all he did was looked at me and my mother with a sadness in his eyes that she had never before seen on her caring fathers face. Milly confused and frustrated look at Landon for hope he looked even worse he was pale as a sheet of clean paper at her Fathers work and you could see fear in her eyes. Milly looked at the two men that came to the door and all of the sudden everything clicked together she new who these men were of course she did everyone new who they were they would come to peoples home and take them off to some place she heard some girls at her school taking about them she remember their exact words "my daddy got taken away by those awful mean men and then a couple of months later we got a letter said that he died that's all just a letter we couldn't even have a funeral we didn't know were he was." Milly looked at Landon again and ran over to him, he and father were whispering to the men. she ran over to landon and started to talk threw sobbs "you cant go you'll never come back you cant go" "Milly i promise i will come back to you i promise" "no you wont everyone who go's never comes back i hear people talk about how everyone go's they never come back they never do, ever!" "Milly some do you know i will be one of them it will be ok" Milly at this point couldn't say anthing more she was crying like a baby in her older brothers arms. That was the last time Milly was held by landon they were the last words she spoke to him it was the last everything
Those strange men who never smiled took the person she had loved the most i just a senconds, without permision, without asking, without anything, they just took him and left

3 comments:

Ashley said...

You're a great writer!

J.J. said...

Is the story about war? Just wondering. Nice writing, by the way.

Eden said...

well not exactly only the first part is kinda